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Reviews For: Happily Ever After
wantedINheaven 2004-10-03 . chapter 1
Aw that's actually really sad! *sniff* Very nice write!
Kur'denras 2004-08-30 . chapter 1
Good poem. There's a little constructive criticism I'd like to put in, though. Your rhythm doesn't stay the same, a good consistent rhythm helps you get into the flow of the poem. Also, there's a few points where you rhyme things that... well... don't rhyme. I.e. dream-seemed, decreed-agree, answer-after. The poems good though, and I like the message. What I say though is that good things come to those who can recognize good things.
-Kur'denras
P.S. Sorry for misinterpreting your previous poem.
P.P.S. I do agree with all your other things (as stated in your bio.)
karmakaze 2004-08-29 . chapter 1
Aww, that is so sad. But I agree that fairy tale romance is overrated. Great work.
Death by Night 2004-08-29 . chapter 1
Great poem and awesome reality, although your timing seems to be a little off. Keep plugging along,
~DBS
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