Wonderful! Marvelous! It reminds me a lot of 'Prayer'. Anyway, great poem!

A.R. Twilight

This puts "Aingeal" to shame. In fact, this is almost the exact opposite of "Aingeal". My theory is that Heaven and God and Angels are so perfect, they exist on a plane of reality so different than ours that they are beyond all comprehension of humanity, so we put them in our own images of what paradise is to us, or even ourselves. We will never fully understand the concept until the time is right. Even though I don't necessarily believe this, I believe you and I can simply agree to disagree and leave it at that.

Yoku dekimashita,

~Nico

that is so beautiful. honestly. i luv it

Thre times I've tried to review this... Beautiful! Keep up the awesome work!
Needa S.