Whoa, good poem. idk ur style, but from wut i have read this is like u said rare, yet it was vry well written. I like it.

I just have to say that this poem helped me understand a few things! Thanks

this would make a great song.
the words are apt
and bring out feeling well.
the image built
is wonderful.
-kismet.

Hey buddy...THis is awesome a lil kinky for real but you know u got a skill like no other You can write anything BRAVO!

great poem great flow great rhyming

I actually got a few twisted laughs out of that one. But it still pretty good. Good job.