|Reviews for The deal|
| Allie 9/21/04 . chapter 1
Whoa, good poem. idk ur style, but from wut i have read this is like u said rare, yet it was vry well written. I like it.
| Kriss-C 8/31/04 . chapter 1
I just have to say that this poem helped me understand a few things! Thanks
| negligible fictional force 8/30/04 . chapter 1
this would make a great song.
the words are apt
and bring out feeling well.
the image built
| Leo 8/29/04 . chapter 1
Hey buddy...THis is awesome a lil kinky for real but you know u got a skill like no other You can write anything BRAVO!
| Raven Gray 8/29/04 . chapter 1
great poem great flow great rhyming
| Space-ghost-boy 8/29/04 . chapter 1
I actually got a few twisted laughs out of that one. But it still pretty good. Good job.