You're sort of drifting between rhyming and not rhyming, which i don't get, but you make up for it with amazing content. Apart from the fact that you have circled this poem around two of my alltime favourite things (a dragon and the moon) you have used all the right emotions to reach the reader. Well done.

I like the way that you keep the reader guessing what the poem is talking about until near the end. This is a very sad poem, but I like it. Keep up the ** work!

Thanks for your reviews! And sorry I've been out of it for a while; blame it on school!

I love this poem ^_^ The dragon and the moon--such beautiful imagery... Also, I liked that you mentioned your inspiration. It's always so cool to see where ideas come from.

I'm sorry I can't review more now. I'll remind myself to come back later.

--Eyes Unclouded

Very, very, very impressive. Beautiful and sad, shows your growth as a writer. Great job

That's very good. Sort of soothing and comforting in a sad sort of way. I like it a lot. Keep up your good work.

Later, K.S. Night

Ohh this is soo good! I like the imagery you created. Keep up the wowness that you write!

Yes, it's me again! XD
*sighs* So beautiful. There really is no more to say. I'm speechless, and some of my friends can tell you, that does not happen very often at all! :-)
~All the best from one who is Blissfullyl Unaware

wow. very impressive. great wording. well done.
write on

this is a very beautiful and very sad poem. i really like it. it really portrays loneliness and longing with wonderful accuracy and feeling. it makes me feel lonely and like i need something i don't have. dang. that's good. anyway, as i speak (or... type?), i am working on chapter ten for shades of night! i have been too busy lately to update, but i am remedying that now.

This was an awesome poem! I'm not much of a poet, so I cannot comment on meter and rhyming, but it touched me deeply. The words flowed effortlessly and there were some very powerful moments in there.
Good work.

i like this. it's very pretty, and the imagery is really well-written. it flows nicely ^__^

wow you seriously write good...damn it why can't I find different words...well you just write really well, and oh yes just to tell you if the question is in your mind...Toheema isn't gay don't worry and I will be updating soon and reading more of your story soon but I don't know when because my computer has a virus and needs to be fixed and I'm on my parents computer at work.

beautifully written poem. NAd from what you said in your A/N insperation came easily. T_T I'm jealous now.
I can't name a favorite part, I liked the whole thing really. I haven't seen a Dragon poem in a long time. ANd I like talking about dragons, so this was a good one to read right now.

That was a really beautiful poem. I really loved it, it touched me. I love the moon so much. It was just beautiful. Love Nelum

very pretty and it flowed very nicely:) as always, ecellent work!! luv, meg