oh i,like your story, very good, and descripted, hope you acheve your dream to become a great writer, because your definately on your way.

XD woops. I accidentally read chapter 2 first. Wow. I'm really out of it aren't I?
Anywho, I'm still eagerly awaiting your update(s) of WoL. This is very placating though. I'm very interested in this storyline. Ironically, I'm also writing a vampie fic. Would you really hate it if I had to consult you sometimes? I don't know a lot about vamps or christianity.
Very intruiging, good action stuff. Bloodhound is cool ^_^ It's amazing that he could take out an entire club full of vamps though. Wow. I love the light grenade tactic.
Keep writing! *salute*
~Pont

That was GREAT! I don't usually review but that was really, eally good. I hope you work keep working on this.