Wow... um, wow! This is really great from many different perspectives. Incredible writing just by itself. But the fact that you put yourself in someone elses shoes, and wrote an amazing poem is just... mind blowing. This is definately a stand out from the rest.

lol.. I lvoe the author's note
That was one of your best poems.. very powerful and it flows nicely.. awesome poem ::adds to favorites::

OMG! That was beautiful. Actually, I am reading the Mists of Avalon now. I love it, its awesome! But it hasnt told of anyone his heart belongs to, other than Morgaine in the Great Marriage...but this poem was awesome. E-mail or im me some time

heh, heh, ill believe you. I get what your saying. I like how you explain, that those blonde preppy girls can be depressed to. I never really saw it that way. Brilliant, NEVER stop writing.

LOL. Don't you hate it when you're FORCED to say "it's not about me"? People think you have to be something to write about something...
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Anyways, nice poem. I felt sorry for the girl. ;_;
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10/10