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| thisspiltmilk 2005-01-11 ch 1,  | abusei heart liz! so does brett, he says hi! |
| DragonAiua 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abuseOh man, I feel the same way!! I love that. |
| Furbs 2004-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. This song rocks! Its really sad, but i love it. The only thing is some of the lines are worded too long, so they don't fit in the beginning verse(i think, you don't have it in stanzas, but i assume its the first verse). But, with some reworking, i think it'll be really awesome. The mood and feeling of it, especially with the chorus, is fantastic. The stupid one again? Hm, yeah that's what I thought? |
| Greatheart 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Kind of sad though. You ever consider actually putting these songs to music? Anyway, keep writing, I'll keep writing and reviewing! Alaina |