I think this is one of your better pieces. I especially like the sense of confusion and disorientation. Great lines: "Bluer skies than this have rained before/Lie down in the sky and stare up at the floor."

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I love the lines "I never asked to be their perfect sky", and "Stuffy air rank with whispers of an angel's death" in particular, but its all really good, very well written. Now i'm off to read more of your stuff =)

One word for this - beautiful. The feeling, the style, the metaphores, I like everything about this poem. On my fav list!