nicely done. the title is very smart. and to whoever said you didn't think of the title. . . well, even if it isn't a unique one, it's still very smart with this story. nice.

so... i cant remember if this is good cuz i read it...2 or 3 years ago? But yeah... i think credit should be given to whoever came up with the title, and i know it wasnt you... (yeah, feel free to delete this but I WANT MY MENTION...well no, not really. i'm really bored)

yours sincerely,

Captain Red

Totally romantic and the joke at the ned was pure gold, excellent!

AAW!
THAT'S SO CUTE! *huggles*
Write more, please!

Its really good! carry on the good work!