Wow, two years since you've stoped on this excellent storyline. Well, I hope that one day you will get that muse back so that you can finish this amazing story. 'Cause I want to know how he thanks her! lol. Once again, I'm always amazed at how good a writer you are. Keep up the writing in your other stories! moonrabbit04

I just finished reading the three stories in the Shadow Vale, and I have to say that I was amazed with how enraptured I was with them. They were all very good, and so far 'Ghost Owl' is my favorite - which by the way, you HAVE to finish! The way you write is extrodinary, and at first while I was reading 'The Goblin King' I didn't think I would enjoy it, but I was hooked by mid-Prologue. The same with 'Ghost Owl', and while I might not have liked 'The Heartless Princess' as much as the others, it had its own good points to it as well. Anyway, I really enjoyed the stories, and I seriously hope that you finish 'Ghost Owl', it is really good!

*manatical laughter* Why do I sense an adventure? I really hope you update this gem soon :)

Finally I've been able to start reading your original stories too... *yess!*I really like your characterization. And the storyline seems promising, even if this is just the beginning of a much longer 'journey'. May it start again soon *looks at last update and sighs*... Also because now this cliffie is stuck in my brain and won't go away.Well, bye for now.

sugoi! this is only the second story i've read on here and it's really good! I hope you continue soon

Wow, that's really good, but you're mean for leaving it off like that. Please update!

sorry, wrote the wrong email before, meant to write yahoo.com not hotmail.com =)
Anyway, I read the following (was it two?) parts at your site and I really liked them as well and am eagerly awaiting a continuation

My, what an evil place to end it! =)
I really liked it and I hope you'll update it at least relativly soon.
The only thing I can think of, right now, that could be improved is your use of dialect when they speak. It feels a bit irregular, sometimes it's very thick and other times there's practically no dialect at all. But it wasn't so obvious that it detracted much from the story.
I liked Thyme and I'm intrested to see how her interaction with Shael continues
(btw I came here from your ff.net page and it was nice to see that not only do you write good fanfiction but good original stories as well =) )

very suspensefull. i really like it.

I like the title of your story, and I also liked the italics. This was very interesting. It had a nice writing style and nice ideas for the story. Please review one of my stories and chibichocobo's. Her best story is Dreamscapes. Peace up A Town.
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