THIS IS SO GOOD! Cuz you have to tell that friend of yours that he/she is awesome! It's so dramatic and poetic! I can just imagine him. The lone father about to die with his family in the desert. I love the ending, it gives it this mournful yet doomed atmosphere. Two thumbs up! _ Comments: Some spelling problems and grammatical errors, but hey, it's no biggie.

PS: FROZEN HEART IS BACK! I know you know the story already, so don't spill the beans but if you have some time, can you please check it out anyway? Please? Oh, and UPDATE FRIENDSHIP 4!

I love this poem. This was great!

Nice touch. It has a decent ending to it as well, which I think deserves a good round of applause. Nice job.
- ShadowEver