I know its been a while, but it'd be great if you finished this...I really enjoyed it!

i really like this story. it is really interesting and it is not all mushy gushy love type wither!! (although i like that type very much too!) I really like your style of writing. and i enjoy the story very much. keep writing please!! i really want to know what happens next!

This sounds very interesting! But how does fairlight know how to speak if she was raised by a wolf and has been living with it from before she would be able to learn and remember?

So I just found this story...and I love it! And I also noticed that it was updated in like 04...please don't stop! You've stoped on so many other good ones and it would be a shame if you stopped on this one. You're an amazing writer and when you publish a book I'm most definately geting it but please don't stop this story! Its really good and I wanna know what happens! Ugh! I hate cliffhangers...lol!

wow, I just found this story after re-reading Broken on ffn for the tenth time... and all I can say is Wow! Did all of this really come from your imagination? I love your brain! The characters are so vivid, and I love shadow. I can't wait for an update^^ The world is so well described I feel like I could vist there for vacation^^ Time to pack the bags^^

You truly have a thing for Elves and faeries... ^^I heartily agree with this. As well as with strong-willed, independent young heroines. Bot Thyme and Fairlight are so (and both have such unteresting male counterparts... *dreamy sigh*)The setting is ok, with a nice Tolkien-esque flavour. Dialogues are tasty and enjoyable, maybe just a bit too modern in style of speech. Somehow I imagined them to talk in a more old-style manner. But your tale is enjoyable nonetheless (and I like the bits of 'baka vs odango-atama'-ness in the interaction between Fairlight and Asher).Bye

i love the story so far,and i was wonderin' if you've written any books if you tell me the names of a couple that would be awesome!please e-mail me if you have.

I really love this story so far...it's a pity that you're not finished. I'm looking forward to reading more.

More! MORE i say! Gah! The hotness of Asher *dreamy sigh* And i love fairlight's dry personality - so good! Very happy Shadow is a live and kicking hehe. Cant WAIT to see more *nudge nudge nudge8 ^.~
Anyhoo - catch ya later Maggy dear *squidge*
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Beautiful, beautiful story thus far. i can't wait for the next chapter, update soon.

Lovely description and imagery. Wonderful characterization as well. I enjoyed the snappy banter between Fairlight and Asher. One complaint though: there's a Tolkien-ish sort of atmosphere surrounding this story, but the effect is often interrupted by the dialogue. What I mean is the dialogue sounds very modern, which isn't exactly compatible with the setting of the story, do you understand what I'm trying to say? Other than that, I very much enjoyed this story. Good work.

Love the ending. Hope theres more. You update fast. ^^ I love it.

DON'T STOP! Keep it comming!

Love it! I was never expecting another update this quickly. I read the Goblin King book on your site and I wanted to say something about its greatness but your guest book was full.

I feel so very stupid for having asked about Labyrinth withen the Labyrinth now. (Love your website.)
Are you on the message boards? Wouldnt it be funny if I had talked to you for four years and not known it.
I shall now promptly curl up in your website and keep reading.