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Reviews For: The First Christmas

AGZ
2004-09-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseAH E! This is a scary poem or story thingy!! I won't dare read it again!! Why? Why!? Why did the cat save him No E!
luv, AGZ
P.S: No!
Devin J Pickrell
2004-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseaaw. I love kitties. I love kitties more now. That was cute. [Oh, and if for some reason you look at my stuff I give ye a warning; all stories be left unfinished and thy greatest of mine, tis not there.]
Ramona Loretta
2004-08-29
ch 1,
abuseHA! Very amusing! HAHAHAH!
Smemily
2004-08-29
ch 1,
abuseAw that's so cute and very cool! I like your idea. See at the beginning I thought the cat was like a symbol of Jesus but the end is so witty and clever. I like the rhythm and use of couplets also! Bravo!
Smemily xox
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