I like this poem a lot, favo part"A clock does not control time." Wonderful! well done!

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! GOING ON MY FAV LIST! WOW! I love it - so TRUTHFUL. so REAL! KWL! ~DS~

it isn't cute, more so a very treue explination of time, yes?

"A clock does not control time..." so true, but it seems our society thinks it does. I like this poem.

Hi Claire! It's me. I liked your poem. Why can't we do anything like this in English? Your poems are interesting and I can actually understand them. (which is way more than I can say for the poem we done about snail)
I didn't realize you had so many things uploaded when you told me you got an account. I've been here way longer and have less that half your amount... I'll catch up eventually :)
Good luck and keep writing!

You are a VERY good poet. I came here because I loved TRUE LIES so much i thought your other poems must be fantasic!

So true, so true. Well written =)
School Tomorrow! Will you put up a new chapter for "that's not how it hapened"?
Love and bubbles
*@*LAURA*@*

So true...people often forget about the most precious things in their lives while trying to run their own in this chaos of life. Thanks for your review to "An Everlasting Dream." And yes, it's based from my personal experience...sighs. Keep up good work here. =)

What a sweet, heart-felt poem! AWW! I loved it! Very cute. It's also very true. Great job.

but what if time truely has no meaning? just what we think/feel during it??

So true. I seem to forget how precious time is... Great poem! Keep at it!
~K~