Hahaha! Cute!
Tangerine Tikcle

Ah, the wonders of the writing document! And also the wonders of the energy that builds to such quality (pro plus and caffine) and a good mind that has an insight to all!

Very clever! Interestiong concept, but I love it! _

Ah! Wonderful. The rhythm is fast but never stumbles-bravo! The dropping of the periods to the next line was a nice touch.
However, there is very little punctuation so it seems that the poem goes on to long without a breath. Breaking it up a little would help to make it more speakable.
Hail the paperclip! Though, I turned him off long ago.

i loved it. this was enjoyable. great job!

This is well written, but I've always hated that stupid paper clip. All of the little office assistants annoy me. Nicely written though.

Disturbing!
Well, honestly, I thought it was cool. Keep up the splendid work...

Wow! This is really nice! Its a strange topic, but it works great! Kudos!
r&r my writing sometime!
-B