|Reviews for Click|
| Tangerine Tickle 8/30/04 . chapter 1
| Horsemeat 8/30/04 . chapter 1
Ah, the wonders of the writing document! And also the wonders of the energy that builds to such quality (pro plus and caffine) and a good mind that has an insight to all!
| MyMuseIsOnVacation 8/30/04 . chapter 1
Very clever! Interestiong concept, but I love it! _
| bassplayer 8/29/04 . chapter 1
Ah! Wonderful. The rhythm is fast but never stumbles-bravo! The dropping of the periods to the next line was a nice touch.
However, there is very little punctuation so it seems that the poem goes on to long without a breath. Breaking it up a little would help to make it more speakable.
Hail the paperclip! Though, I turned him off long ago.
| MaHaLLz 8/29/04 . chapter 1
i loved it. this was enjoyable. great job!
| Nails For Your Crucifix 8/29/04 . chapter 1
This is well written, but I've always hated that stupid paper clip. All of the little office assistants annoy me. Nicely written though.
| Zarancids 8/29/04 . chapter 1
Well, honestly, I thought it was cool. Keep up the splendid work...
| B. Itokuzu 8/29/04 . chapter 1
Wow! This is really nice! Its a strange topic, but it works great! Kudos!
r&r my writing sometime!