|Reviews for Finding the Past|
| Meli-dear 2/27/05 . chapter 1
ahw, Andrew was so sweet! He was absolutely adorable Wish I had a brother like that!
Only, if Cassarah was the only daughter, who's Amelia? A maid?
Poor girl, mean pirates! I didn't like the pirates... but I guess that I wasn't supposed to *foolish grin*
Only I noticed one thing with grammar, sometimes you had it right, sometimes not, when someone says something. I'll give an example.
'"Hello," the girl said.' This is grammatically correct, but you often did '"Hello." The girl said'. Note the difference? It's no big deal, and doesn't really bother me with reading, but I thought that I might point it out ]
Further, I liked it, and wonder what will happen to poor Cassarah!