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| molzi 2004-08-30 ch 1,  | abuseYou didn't put a capital as the first letter for the fourth line, and I think it should have one. Nice rough structure to it, short, but very good. I really like it. ps - i review you, want to return the favour? |
| Serene Waters 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseM. Well written. I think it could have gone on, but it was nice. |
| Heaven Take Me Home 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to that so well...I hope you're alright. -Autumn |