Wow. I really liked this piece. I can definately relate. Nice job. You captured the emotion very well here.

~Arafax~

LOVED IT!Like always you are the best!And everyone can relate to that poem!Also since I'm such a romance freak I think it goes right to the heart.By the way post the one about the your golden warrior.I love that poem too.Love you lots Tin Tin ;)
p.s.You are the only who knows why I sign Tin!

Mads you really know how to capture a mood. As always, I love it and it's even better knowing who it's about... or is it someone else?

Hello! Its the annoying Lizzy's sister, Melissa! I like your poem. Lizzys are kinda hard to understand. Anywho, (again) I LIKE YOUR POEM! ^_^