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| Rinz Thomas 2007-12-08 ch 18, anon. | abuseso far i liked ur story...i tell it as an experience of life! plz write the rest of the story and edit it... i'm looking forward to it... i waiting for the rest of it for weeks. plz finish the story... thanx a lot! Rinz... |
| ...Unknown... 2007-11-25 ch 18, anon. | abuseThe story is so cool~!I hope you'll write again soon...CAnt' wait to read the next chapter..Hope it'll be as great as the previous ones...^^ |
| phelps112 2007-09-28 ch 18,  | abuseso what happens next? I saw you haven't written in a while and was wondering if you were ever going to finish the story, or if you had it posted somewhere else. |
| homicidal-stoopidity 2007-09-13 ch 18, | abuseplot wise well written (my eyes were recing down the page to see what happened next but in one paragraph you referred to sam as a girl from kai's point of view, who at this point, thought she was a boy. yay! how long till the next one! i havent been on for ages and i missed two new chapters, i'll have to check more often from now on |
| I Darkness 2007-09-09 ch 18, | abusePlease update... SH egoes with him? she lives with him? her mother finds out? does she cast her out? will sam go to ash? she better... meanwhile...I need that update! |
| Drake Van 2007-07-27 ch 18, | abusemy first thought when i realised you hadn't written any more was "-gasp of horror- oh my god you haven't written any more i hate you so much!" so as you can i would really like you to write some more!! please? it's really really good! even if you say you don't like it i don't care!! i want you to finish it!! pretty please? please update!?!! Drake Van |
| darkangelsonic 2007-06-07 ch 18, | abuselike your lemon deuce i like this one too! i wanna know what bhappens next. keep up the good work. i'll be waiting for the next post... Crap! it's getting late! I have a class tomorrow... See you. |
| xbluxmoonx 2007-05-02 ch 18, | abuseAh! you updated! but this was like...last year. lol. i liked the chapter though, it was really good. ^_^ i hope you update soon because you ended at a really good spot. lol xbluxmoonx |
| diet0water 2007-02-19 ch 18, | abuseI love final fantasy! lol... |
| Khaos 2007-01-10 ch 18, anon. | abuseHey Ketos. I see you've made progress since I last left. I like the direction you're going in. Can't wait for another update. Once again... -I- came up with the title. Yay. Proud of myself. Take care. ~Dave~ |
| kakgirl 2006-08-30 ch 18, | abuseoh this story is so good! i love it! update real soon! i want to know what happens! |
| moooooo 2006-08-21 ch 18, anon. | abuseKeep writing! |
| Hawaiianpizzameister 2006-08-21 ch 18, | abuseYour story is so strange that I'm addicted to it=) Update ASAP! |
| LIPSTICK,FLAMINGOS,ROCKROLL 2006-08-20 ch 18, | abuseah! he found out! i need to know what happens! |
| atreyu love 2006-08-20 ch 18, | abusewhat a lovely thing to do :D lol |