i really like your story. The only thing that bugs me is the format, it kind of makes it hard to read.

so far i liked ur story...i tell it as an experience of life!
plz write the rest of the story and edit it...
i'm looking forward to it...
i waiting for the rest of it for weeks.
plz finish the story...
thanx a lot!
Rinz...

The story is so cool~!I hope you'll write again soon...CAnt' wait to read the next chapter..Hope it'll be as great as the previous ones...^^

so what happens next? I saw you haven't written in a while and was wondering if you were ever going to finish the story, or if you had it posted somewhere else.

plot wise well written (my eyes were recing down the page to see what happened next but in one paragraph you referred to sam as a girl from kai's point of view, who at this point, thought she was a boy.
yay!
how long till the next one!
i havent been on for ages and i missed two new chapters, i'll have to check more often from now on

Please update...
SH egoes with him? she lives with him? her mother finds out? does she cast her out? will sam go to ash?
she better...
meanwhile...I need that update!

my first thought when i realised you hadn't written any more was "-gasp of horror- oh my god you haven't written any more i hate you so much!" so as you can i would really like you to write some more!! please? it's really really good! even if you say you don't like it i don't care!! i want you to finish it!! pretty please? please update!?!!

Drake Van

like your lemon deuce i like this one too! i wanna know what bhappens next. keep up the good work. i'll be waiting for the next post... Crap! it's getting late! I have a class tomorrow... See you.

Ah! you updated! but this was like...last year. lol. i liked the chapter though, it was really good. ^_^ i hope you update soon because you ended at a really good spot. lol

xbluxmoonx

I love final fantasy! lol...

Hey Ketos. I see you've made progress since I last left. I like the direction you're going in. Can't wait for another update. Once again... -I- came up with the title. Yay. Proud of myself. Take care.
~Dave~

oh this story is so good! i love it! update real soon! i want to know what happens!

Keep writing!

Your story is so strange that I'm addicted to it=) Update ASAP!

ah! he found out! i need to know what happens!