Hmm...Looks very good so far. I do hope you write more. Yes, i followed you here from ff.net ^_^ I was looking for more stories and look what I found.

~Kaiho Neko

Write more, write more, write more!! Please! You (the girl with the wings is you, right?) are trapped in your own universe and there's a boy and references to Greek mythology and promises of dark magics! Wai!! A masterful story in the making! Don't leave me hanging on the edge of that cute little cliff! I wanna go down into the valley!

Mata~!

~Tsukiyo