Bravo! I applaude you! This is officially one of my fav poems. :D

Ouch. The honesty of a break up and how one isn't effected by it, and the other is devestated. You articulate it well. Good job.

wow... im in love with this poem. i can relate to it down to the sea blue eyes. my ex had blue eyes, now their grey... thats a whole nother story... i love this so much. the only differences between our loves is that yours was a girl... though i have had my heart torn by those of my gender... i want to thank you for this poem... its all ive been trying to say with my writing...
much love forever and always,
pyre of the flames

Wow... this definetly hit something in me... it's very powerful, truly moving, I loved it, it brought back some memories at the beginning and the end brought me back to reality... keep on writing...

i like this poem it really speaks what words cant describeplease recommed more poems like this to me

aw I like it a lot... it is appropriately titled and the descriptions are awesome... great poem