 Ame Lockheart 2005-04-05 . chapter 1I really liked this,the lines about the moon and stars...I'm not sure what you meant by it but I think, from the feeling I'm getting, everyone feels a little like this... or at least I can relate... >_ |
 kalariah 2004-09-01 . chapter 1This one.. seems dreamy almost, like a deliberate journey through the mind that won't be shaken. I like the line:
"Life is a frontier; every moment is like new uncharted territory"
It's like we're charting our courses as we go, making a map of the human life, which won't be of any use except to ourselves, for every frontier--every life--is vastly different, and yet somehow familiar. And then again:
"The stars have been clouded but my intentions remain steadfast"
Even though the way can be unclear, with no guiding light, the intentions and goals remain the same, forging a path through the darkness. You've found such a good way of expressing all this; I really like this one of yours. I think it's one of my favorites. Excellent job! |