Kudos! I'm wish my rhyming flowed like this, most of mine sounds forced...

I like this. It sounds like a ballad, though I could be wrong. Do you have music for it? Well done, kudos.

This one has music dancing through every line, full of emotions and sweet rhythms that sing to the soul. I really like the style it's written in--rather like a lot of my favorite songs. I especially like the ending:
"Tonight is not another night
It's the beginning of the rest of your life"

I like it.. awesome repition... nice rhyming too!