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FM Radio 2007-11-06 ch 1,	abuseHave i told you that i love this? I don't remeber, if i have. Well i do. I really do. If this story was a guy, taller than me, had a nice body, was attractive, had great hair, and had a personality that fit well with mine, i would marry it. you should write more onshots like this, or a companion oneshot, one where he takes it at his pace, and ignores her pleas.
sunflowersing 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseNice. Are you going to update it? Please?! sunflowersing
flojo22811 2007-05-23 ch 1,	abusegreat story - really good! are you ever going to update dangerous liaisons?
A Dark White Rose 2006-10-11 ch 1,	abuseso sad i hope she finds happiness...i kinda hope u could consider writing more on it but sometimes a writer needs to write things that don't neccisarily need an end i wish u luck on your writingA Dark Rose
kaab 2006-09-22 ch 1, anon.	abusethis story is good but the whole plot is just wrong... ahahha... u know what i mean... hahhehhe... well.. it waqs good while it lasted.. smiles and giggles... kaab be out!!
Maroon 2006-04-26 ch 1,	abuseThis was intriguing, because I wasn't sure what it was until the very end and I think that was deliberate. It was a good short story where no deatil was neccesary and I wasn't hankering to read more- which for a short story is good. It should be short, to the point and fufilling, but at the same time leave some questions unanswered, leaving the reader to think for themselves and decide their own thoughts on this. The sex didn't seem awkward it wasn't particulary graphic so therefore not crude because thats all it was, was sex to her. If it had been romantic then I would have expected more "sappy" descriptions but like you've said its not. Anyway I liked this looking forward to reading more of your stories Love maroon
2005-12-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh. not good. that's... a relationship on the rocks, to say the least. Question: why is this under angst? everyone except for the guy seems perfectly content playing the games they play...
LilLaTLuv 2005-10-13 ch 1,	abuseHey! This is good! I've never written under this theme myself, never cared for it, but this was a remarakable rendiction! I think I said that right. Anyway, it was great, and I loved it, but please, please, PLEASE don't let Dangerous Liasons have a sad ending, like all your short stories, seem to from what I can tell. PLEASE? And update it soon, please, and maybe an R rating is called for? I don't know, it's your story, but I love it and am a great fan! Seriously, it is awesome! By the way, what is a sue? Well, I like the story, don't ever let anyone say you're not a good writer, because you're definately incredible, and UPDATE ASAP! PLEASE?!? I love Dangerous Liasons! Luv ya,Tashi :)
kimpster 2005-03-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseits good, i liked how you wrote it, and yes it was angsty write more
Dead Red 2004-12-17 ch 1,	abuseWoah, really intense! The only suggestion is, where you say 'She needed him. She needed it', it just sounds a bit awkward. Try something like 'I needed him. I needed what I knew only he could give me' or something. I dunno, never written along this... theme!! Lotsa loveScarlett
Working hard hardly working 2004-10-24 ch 1,	abuseWow. That's just...wow. You're an awesome writer, you truly are.
naivete chica 2004-10-06 ch 1,	abuseYou're such a good writer! I was captured throughout the whole story, and you described everything perfectly, and with suspense. The twist at the end was perfect also! This was better than Champagne and Diamonds. I actually guessed beforehand what was going to happen in that one...this one's twist was presented in a better way. ^^ Keep updating Dangerous Liaisons! And if you're going to make it more intense(hopefully you will), I think it should be made R as well. Actually...I think it should be R already. ~Luv n[a]ivete chic[a]
ThirteenSugars 2004-09-21 ch 1,	abuseOh my word! That was so superbly done! I can't believe it. At first I thought this is just going to be okay, but damn my eyes, it was perfect. i liked it a lot. I'm so jealous of how good you are, I think I'm going to kill you tomorrow...just kidding, anyway, I wish I could add you on my list, but it's full already. Don't worry, I'll add you on my other pen name. i made another just so I can put other authors and stories that I wanted to put in this pen name but couldn't before. ^_^ I'll do it later coz I gtg now...but first I gotta read Champagne and Diamond Unholy Saint Me
youdon'tknowme91 2004-09-03 ch 1,	abusei thought this was good :) though i would really like it if D. Lialisons would soon be updated :) i didnt understand the last part, though.. was it him thinking it? and yeah, in general, he's cheatingon her and she's cheating on him,that it? +P lol, didnt really get this chapter =P but i thought it was good stuff, honestly :)
Mass Descent 2004-09-01 ch 1,	abusethat was great. hah i read 'Damien's review. lol..."Hot stuff. I was so turned on I almost wanted a vigina. Loves it." hah. indeed. the story did get me so turned on i almost wanted to shout to whoever damien is and be like "im a virgin. take me take me." sigh...that is the end of my pitiful life.

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