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| Tom Madden 2004-09-22 ch 1,   | i really like it. i think you did an excellent job writing this. keep up the good work! |
| mistressKC 2004-09-12 ch 1, | another good song! that song really says a lot about our society nowafays... good work ^-^ |
| QueenVixta 2004-09-07 ch 1, | Really really good! I love the bit ...there's no innoncence within these fake smiles. Wicked! :D |
| eyluvmusic 2004-08-31 ch 1, | This is beautiful and amazing... I love it, Why? you might ask Well because first the subject is good and you let the reader in, and most writers find that hard to do sometimes but you managed to do it very well. I also like certain words and sentances which you put in there, it makes it more intresting. WELL DONE! |
| AngelicDagger 2004-08-31 ch 1, | Seems like nothings quite right then. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-08-31 ch 1, | Heartfelt and honest. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |