Good chapter, nice way for her to meet Jade. It's gonna get interesting and hopefully FP stops skrewing up. Good work Kase.

I knew that girl would be Jade. So Kasey wants to make her a vampire? Wow... I wonder what Jade will be like all vamped-up and stuff.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

i think youre amazingly talented!

Good work here! Love the different POV, love seeing how Amos reacted and what he thought.
Mistake: "When you become the father I once new, :: Should be knew, but you knew that lols.
GOOD WORK KASE!

Wow... Kasey actually hit Amos. I knew she would be ** when he called her Kassia, but I didn't know she would slap him. Wow. I wonder what Amos will do now?
~*Crazy Baiko*~

Sorry for the late review, I didn't know you had updated. Kasey is so mean. lol. It was funny when she purposely kissed Roswell like that in front of Amos just to make him mad. I can see why she would be irritated, though. Amos is a little bit overprotective. He needs to lighten up some. And just as I thought, this does takes place after "Through the Bloody Eyes of Kasey". This must be that new place Amos found to escape from Reon.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

Good Chapter! Love reading your stuff as always

Amos really cares for Kasey. I know she feels the same way, but she needs to show it more.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

im a tad confused... but then again im always confused... either way, i like!

Aw, you really feel for Amos. He cares a lot about Kasey and it was a sad, sweet way to end the chapter. Good job on this one.

This was sad. Jade lost her mom, too. It was suc a sad chapter. I wonder what role Jade will play in all this.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

This is such good writting. :) I felt bad for Ross and Kasey, especially Ross, thinking Kasey will leave him and such. I hope they stay together. They are great together.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

hum i like this! i do. youre so talented wow... :D

Poor Jade, sounds like she has it rough. I definetly feel for her character.
Just some minor things (Don't throw things at me!!)
>>. She had never hesitated to put father > "You're not always with me. I have to play by myself all the time, mommy."> And now I need you to listen to mommy very closely."> "I need you... to leave mommy alone here in the room... and shut the door... Then I want you to call grandma on the phone... and tell her to come over right away, and that mommy says it's very important... And no matter what... do not... come into mommy's room,"> "But mom-..." > "Now come here and give mommy a hug." > "I love you, too, mommy,"

Aw, how sweet. I love those moments between Ross and Kase, it's different cause Kase doesn't show her feelings much. Good chapter here, but a question...where does this fit in the timeline of your 3 total stories?