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Reviews For: Burning For Revenge

windowbreak
2004-11-01
ch 1,
abuseits still good hun. not as good as misery but still good. still good. (talks like stitch) by the way,
'crys'is spelt as cries. that's all that was wrong. also murders. dont exactly get the use of that word. but its good! haha what did you get for english grade during poetry unit? A++?? tis good. all ur poems are good. some are better than others though
Spanish Dreams
2004-08-31
ch 1,
abuseGood but in the first line you say "crys". It should be "cries".
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