 Cadience Gemma Topaz 2004-09-21 . chapter 1Go becca...she shouldn't have done what she did...I love this one it makes me giggle...i can just imagine you reading this lol such passion...good work. |
 Genius to the End 2004-09-06 . chapter 1Is this really what you feel? It's so good. |
 Raven Nicolette Marchand 2004-09-05 . chapter 1I Love It!
Smooches,
Nikki |
 Giraffe 63 2004-09-03 . chapter 1*thumbs up* Awshum. Emotion nicely conveyed, and a good concept that is easily received. |
 Pepis . SmellsLikeTeenSpi 2004-08-31 . chapter 1Very good. i really enjoyed it! Keep on writing! |
 Riddle of the Sphinx 2004-08-31 . chapter 1Good poem! Sad though n.n I'm having troubles with my best friend right now too, so I know how you feel. Good luck. |
 Raya Dronaile 2004-08-31 . chapter 1thats sad. very good poem, keep it up! |