i think it's very sweet. my favourite lines are the first part. good workand thanks for reading my work too. ~evaa

*sob* so very tru. i really enjoyed this.

p.s. please R+R all og my work, i couyld use the reviews. please x 10

-Tha G.0.D.

I don't really like the crappy joke line personally. But I loved the poem. It is very deep. Great job!

I thought it was great. I liked your repeated use of the word 'as'. It helped the poem flow. Your word choice was awesome, and there was good imagery. Fantastic job!