|Reviews for The Dragon|
| Rastaban Bright 8/11/08 . chapter 1
That was an amazing tale wonderfully told.
| On Eagle's Wings 12/2/06 . chapter 1
That's a beautiful story.
| Fiore Chnudth 11/18/06 . chapter 1
The end line was very good and probably the only part that kept with your summary of the story. Other than this line, it didn't seem that much about the love of a dragon.
I think it would work better if it was part of some larger story, maybe of dragons maybe not, maybe fantasy maybe not. As I read it, I get the idea that it could be told by someone's grandmother or something.
The first paragraph worked as an alright opening. I wonder though why you didn't at that time mention, it was about the last dragon.
Didn't like the use of the word 'jet'. Feels too contemporary.
In general though, I find there to be a good flow to the story and a somewhat poetic use of words that I like. For example: 'glazed with the mist of death', which was a very good line.
Its funny how everybody not from Scandinavia always like for north-names to end with 'ulf' or a sound familiar to it.
There were a few typos and missing words througout this piece that you'll probably find, if you sometime read it over again.
But in general a nice, short story, mainly recognised by a poetic use of words.
| Cyndi 10/18/06 . chapter 1
I loved this, it felt like reading a poem in the form of a story.
| nightdragon0 9/1/04 . chapter 1
Sounds like it would make quite an interesting fable, fitting with the dragon.