   shannyn 2009-11-19 . chapter 1I read this last night and I so enjoyed it and wanted to thank you for that. :] Even predicting what was going to happen didn't lessen the absolute sweetness of it all haha. Keep it up! :) |
 xxXNightsareDaysXxx 2009-11-13 . chapter 1Nice.. |
 animegirl214 2009-10-30 . chapter 1haha. cutee ;) |
 dwpea 2009-09-12 . chapter 1HILARIOUS! and really really AWESOME! |
 P 2009-08-22 . chapter 1 Love love love this story! Can't wait to check out what else you have written! :-) |
 Arlia Stacy 2009-08-07 . chapter 1LOVED IT!! You didn't overload the scene with similes and metaphors. Very cute and sweet, and a really good cliche piece. :D |
 Don't Eat Me 2009-08-04 . chapter 1good short story
i enjoyed it alot this is my second time reading and i still like it |
| Asa 2009-07-30 . chapter 1 Pure genius.
Awesomely done! |
 AJ southern 2009-07-18 . chapter 1so adorable! |
| Bianca 2009-07-17 . chapter 1 very sexual. woot |
 charm en route 2009-07-11 . chapter 1I read this a long time ago, and I still love it. :D |
 ivy.X.cole 2009-07-10 . chapter 1omigod! that was soo so good! i absolutely loved it! |
| kta 2009-06-15 . chapter 1 loved it, but just one thing, in spanish "querido" is darling but for men, for women the word is "querida". |
 AmethystDancer 2009-06-14 . chapter 1Loved it. The best part was the surprise... and that she dropped the tea. Great job! |
 Roman Candles 2009-06-01 . chapter 1Awesome story. I love the sexual tension and the clash between the characters. Great job! |
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