I like it. I like it alot. Is it true though? And is your comment at the end meant to throw everyone off track? I think you'll get a good mark too. Anything depressing always comes off a deep and philosophical! lol. Good stuff!

HI!. um very intresting though may I ask but what's the RE assignment about?
whatever it is I'm sure you get good marks.
see ya

that was totally incredible! Very emotion and a really gorgous writing style! you will get A+ for sure with that. It was really sad but very inspiring. i will read more of your stuff, and that is going on my fav list!
lani