Ah, strangely sweet and sad. When you read it, you do not expect the ending...great job.

Jaded,SwimmerGirl

Embracing the dark around meWho will save me now?

oh my gosh!!
it's so like a little one!!
for some reason i want to squeal about how cute it is...
hm...
anyhoo - good poem for your first!!

Awe! I used to do the same thing except I'd hide in my closest not th coat one. I just felt the emotion of when I was little too run through me. It was ana amazing piece!