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| Kohl Smeared Soulmate 2008-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseThere something about this that I just like, I can't quite explain what it is though. Maybe it's because it doesn't idealise things, it's a slice of life that seems, for lack of a better word, plausible. You have a great writing style and I hope to read more from you. |
| tyco622 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. Honest, sweet writing; a defined storyline without being heavy; beautiful narrating. Amazing work. |
| justaguy 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. It was great to me. I would like to read more. It sounded possible to me. Thnx for having it. Take care. Keep writing. jag |
| Rachizzle 2006-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was cute =] |
| FlamingDoritos 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuse^_^ THAT was awesome. I love yaoi so much... and you kept me happy all day. Which is saying a lot, because provincials are in three weeks and it's all practice exams every day for the next two weeks so yeah...thanks! |
| myhiddenstory 2006-05-07 ch 1, | abuseWoh...great job.To bad it just...ended. It was going well..I like the way it seemed to go so quick, but kept to the plot, and it all worked well.Great job, Good luck with your whole time thingy, life is harsh |
| zeecrazyeggbloos 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseohmigosh, i loved this! everything about it is so good! it's so short but already you know everything you need to know about these people even if you didn't say it straight out. it's so good. ^^ |
| CakeForEveryone 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abusesniff sniff...I LOVE IT! |
| Nix 2006-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute. Very, abnormally, unbelievably, adorably cute. Well done. Very well done. |
| elephant-chimes 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is to answer Kitsune Luver's question regarding sex in my stories: Hello! I'm gald you liked it. I guess I don't write sex scenes because I'm not really used to writing them. Also, it's because I'm typing on the family computer (I really need to get my laptop online... >. |
| Kitsune Luver 2005-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice job. Hey, how come you never include the actual sex in any of your stories? I'm not complaining or anything, just wondering. Are you uncomfortable writing things like that? It's not really needed for the romantic feeling to get through. |
| TaigaSama 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abuseNYO! That was great. It was poetic without losing its prose. I've been in Jesse's shoes but I didn't come nearly as close to getting my guys as he did and it reflects those feelings. Could you tell me why girls are the best yaoi-slash-m/m writers?~~TaigaSama |
| Renzie 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWow! I really loved this. Really, really, a lot. It wouldn't have been so good if it was Guy x Girl. It just makes everything better this way. :) And I'm not even a big male/male reader. Great job! I loved this a lot! < 3 |
| bloodkillme 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abusei love your stoy why the stopness? |
| Indie 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really quite like this story. it's sweet and wonderful. Keep going! |