|Reviews for 03|
| helpless-pretender 2/1/06 . chapter 1
Oh i like it. Don't you just hate it when people lie?
| Shyanna 1/3/05 . chapter 1
Cool. I wouldn't have understood if I hadn't read the Author's note, but that's what A/N's are for! Keep writing, and don't let flamers get to ya!
| Bananarama 9/16/04 . chapter 1
WTF? What the hell are you trying to protray? You can't even properly describe your emotions and scenes. This really SUCKS. I can't believe you even DARED to post this on FictionPress. This is a disgrace to us poets. Especially when FictionPress is a place for TALENTED blossoming writers. Okay, here are some 'constructive critisisms' for you. 1. You should do something about your ENGLISH. I could have sworn that when I clicked on your poem, the language stated was ENGLISH and not some gibberish. I can't understand a single word you're saying. 2. You shouldn't have included the 'seven month' part. I don't understand it's symbolism! It's like as if you're trying to make it hard for us British people (or any other non-Singaporean for that matter)to understand your poem. That's about all the nicer things to say that I can think of. I certainly do not want to start flaming you with f-words or anything. But I MUST thank you. Now I know what kind of standard Singaporean poets have. You have brought a certain degree of SHAME to your fellow poets. Too bad for them, it's because of your badly-written poems. You should really consider going for some 'poem-writing' workshops before you set your pen on another piece of paper. Oh, one more thing before I stop. Don't write any more poems until you IMPROVE on your english and your style of writing!
| justin 9/16/04 . chapter 1
Oh god! What the fuck are you trying to do? Write a 'POEM'? is this what you call a 'POEM'? It's more like a whole load of BULLSHIT!