Oh i like it. Don't you just hate it when people lie?

Cool. I wouldn't have understood if I hadn't read the Author's note, but that's what A/N's are for! Keep writing, and don't let flamers get to ya!

WTF? What the hell are you trying to protray? You can't even properly describe your emotions and scenes. This really SUCKS. I can't believe you even DARED to post this on FictionPress. This is a disgrace to us poets. Especially when FictionPress is a place for TALENTED blossoming writers. Okay, here are some 'constructive critisisms' for you. 1. You should do something about your ENGLISH. I could have sworn that when I clicked on your poem, the language stated was ENGLISH and not some gibberish. I can't understand a single word you're saying. 2. You shouldn't have included the 'seven month' part. I don't understand it's symbolism! It's like as if you're trying to make it hard for us British people (or any other non-Singaporean for that matter)to understand your poem. That's about all the nicer things to say that I can think of. I certainly do not want to start flaming you with f-words or anything. But I MUST thank you. Now I know what kind of standard Singaporean poets have. You have brought a certain degree of SHAME to your fellow poets. Too bad for them, it's because of your badly-written poems. You should really consider going for some 'poem-writing' workshops before you set your pen on another piece of paper. Oh, one more thing before I stop. Don't write any more poems until you IMPROVE on your english and your style of writing!
-B.R.-

Oh god! What the fuck are you trying to do? Write a 'POEM'? is this what you call a 'POEM'? It's more like a whole load of BULLSHIT!