Haha love this story!

xx
Ali

that was like a very diverse ending! i like it!! i meant i love it!

so cute and adorable.:)

great work!

Love this - Jesse's attitude and Will's personality. :D

Hey!
Just wanted to say that this is a really good story. I love Will, and his (for lack of a better word) "arguments" with Jesse were entertaining and funny. Good job!
xtheonlyonex

aw...that is absolutely adorable :)
Haha...i've already read this story before but it has been an absolute pleasure to read once more.

Thank you so much for such an endearing story :)

Hello!
Fisrt I want to say, wow. It is a fantastic story. It is not only the cliche romance, it is also extremely funny. Her attitude just makes me laugh all the time.
William seemes the kind of guy who does not go down easily, and what I mean with that is that he does not give up when a challenge is given to him. And from my point of view Jesse is for sure a challenge.

Great work.

portuguesenative**

hey

i quite liked this story.
really.

a little bit of an abrupt ending, but i liked it.

(:

love,
~unsociable

hey, loved the story. especially your style of writing! just intriguing. :D only problem i have is that i think the build up was a bit too long and from her breakthrough to the end was a bit short in comparison, but i'm probably just saying that cuz i wanted the romance. :P since this is under general...

loved it all the same! great job.

heyy!! i read ur story - hilton academy - and loved it!! u caught the feeling just right and whats more amazing is that u managed to get them together without cheesifying the whole thing! =P i didnt like ur other story though - honourshill - wayy too intense n a taddle boring. dont take this the wrong way (i know u will, every author has a possessive temper) but i didnt really like it. hilton academy was awesome, since i kinda identify with jesse, i put on the whole facade thing, but i am pretty nice 2 everyone i like. ok, then im not like jesse =P. anywayy ive started a view from the bridge, and im alredy lovin it! kayy then, hav fun, write more, practice b4 takin ur driving test!!

Oh... (and just in case FP does that stupid thing where it deletes extra letters, that was a long, drawn-out sort of "oh").

Firstly, I have to say that this story was fantabulous. I've always fantasised about going to boarding school, but even with a scholarship I would still have had to pay some fees. Therefore, i most especially loved this :D

Next, I loved the remarkable similarity to Pride and Prejudice. I wasn't a big fan of the original novel (shock), though I love Austen as a general rule, but I did very much enjoy this. It made me smile.

This story was tingly and fantastic and wonderful; there were places where I thought it dragged a little and I think you could have condensed Jess' "moping" a little; however, that doesn't changed the fact that this was one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time, and I'm now off to obsessively stalk anything else you've written.

--Hannah x

i read your story a while ago, and i never reviewed. sorry for that...anyway, this story is amazing and i love how you developed your characters. it was a great read and i enjoyed it very much.

So here goes again...

I'm also glad that unlike a lot of stories, it't not all a sudden 'i'm in love with you when a minute ago i hated you'. It was a slow development, and even at the end they weren't quite there yet, which is what i loved about the ending!

Another thing about your writing is that your grammar is perfect, and if one thing bugs me about written things is if people are willing to let other people read their work, it should be readable, and yours is. There are no mistakes that i could tell immediately and your style draws us in from the beginning.

As i said before, i loved this from beginning to end, and I can't wait to read more of your work!

I have just read this entire story over the last few days, and it is amazing! After several nights of little sleep just so i could keep reading i have finished it!

I love stories which make me love them from the first chapter and you did with this, the first chapter drew me in with the introduction to the character of Jesse, and as with everything i read, if i enjoy the beginning i don't stop until i've finished it!

I could have reviewed every chapter and given you long essays about what i loved about each one, but i thought i'd just stick with one at the end! The way you write is incredible, as you give us so much detail but in such small pieces, and the characters are slowly built up over a period of time and we're not just bombarded with loads of information to remember about them all at once. Although it is a very cliche plot (which i adore!) you have put your own spin on it, and created characters which everyone can relate too as i'm sure everyone knows of a Will and a Jesse.

I'm not sure what the word limit on reviews is, but i'll go to another one to continue!

Hi! You know what? I just thought of something while reading this chapter: " Darcy Chase is such a B-I-T-C-H! " I thought it was really funny cuz it rhymed and stuff. :D This story is becoming more awesome every chapter! Hope you reply...

Love it! Absolutly LOVE IT!Write another! Write a hundred more! Brilliant!