That has really strong imagery in it. That poem rocks you are one of my favorite authors as well as the poem too. Please read and review my stuff.

Interesting. It sounds as if you have finally gotten over all of the anger that is some of your earlier work. This is awesome.

As usual this poem is amazing. I did feel that the final two lines were slightly out of place, and maybe would work better as an opening to the poem. Overall, excellent work.

I always love your poetry. This one makes me smile, even if at times, it doesn't seem very light-hearted. Indeed, it is truly the anatomy of hope.

Wow...I'm in awe...this poem is truly amazing. Bravo!

powerful and nicely written as always.. waht do you mean by final poems?