Wow! That was amazing. I have asked myself those same questions many times.

I am disappointed to see there has been no real activity or new things posted in five years on your page.

What happened?

Courtney

wow. it's been a long time. i miss your work.

aprilthursday

Absolutely brilliant.

-Angel

WOW! This is awesome. You said something that no one wants to hear, and shoved it down the throat of the one in power. I loved it!

As good as far as it goes, I noticed the rhyme scheme (i noticed from skimming over other poems you do that alot) good temp. theme... I was thinking it was a bit submissive, but it makes sense, I'm actually a bit burned out on the subject(entirely my problem) I thought it was good, thoughtful and such. good job.

very pwoerful and true.. maybe oput them as separate chapters of one story?

Wow, very in your face. I really like your rhyming scheme. It's so addicting. Well done.