Okay. Once again. Even more weird. HIM is one of my favorite bands.

This is a great story, really!

I thought the plot was really good. sad too... only word of advice.. when a new person is speaking, you should make a new paragraph. So it clarify's who's speaking and what not. Other than that, I really liked it. :)

whoa. this is a good short story with meaning. and the sad thing is, people actually do this for many reasons. neway. great job. please r&r my poems too. i'd really appreciate it.