Good song. Different not only from what people hear on the radio, but from what people typically write as well - in a good way. Keep writing.

It's very refreshing. I can imagine it.

oh how sweet! I love this! great job.

That was BEAUTIFUL. Do you sing? If you do, you should come up with an arrangment to it. once again, GORGEOUS.

Hey. This is really good :) I look forward to what you write next.

I like it.. it flows nicely!

hey, great job with your first song. i really like it. how did you get your formatting like that? plz r and r my poems too. i'd like it very much. thank you.

Wow that is a great song hope you are sucecesful in the future
-Migol-