I like the message... the poem itself was a little sketchy, it doesn't appeal to me but it might to others, so mine is a biased opinion, but I do like the message. I don't know what I'd wish for... I don't think anyone would be able to wish for just 3 things, we humans want way too much.

Wow!

wow...makes u really think about how screwed up this world is and that in fact it WOULD fall apart, because everyone is so selfish these days...i like it a lot...its a really cool poem...awesome as usual

Wow. this poem was really powerful and thought provoking. especially the last line: or would the world fall apart. And it's a wonder to me that you wrote such a great poem just from the idea of a fairy tale. This is one of your best work yet. keep on!

so true! if i had 3 wishes it would take me days to think of a wish! great poem!