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| Herminia 2006-01-12 ch 1,   | Wow. This is terrific. I love the rhyme scheme. Kudos! |
| drunken-doll 2005-06-30 ch 1, | 1st. Hey we have the same b-day except I'm in '892nd. Thanx for the comment ^_^3rd. Lovely job. I've been in the same position before so i can relate and I |
| Tanvi 2005-01-16 ch 1, | Thanx for the review...your poem is really amazing. I know you've heard it before (all the other reviews) but I can really relate to it. Thanks for putting what I'm feeling into words. :) |
| Saeger 2004-11-19 ch 1, | Very emotional... Vividly paints the picture of a life behind masks. |
| fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 2004-10-05 ch 1, | great job on this! thanks lots for the reviews |
| Emi Amara 2004-09-26 ch 1, | Hi! Great poem, it's so full of emotion! Keep writing **WG |
| krystal-jasna 2004-09-14 ch 1, | hi, i agree. it is alot easier to rite sad poems. i like this one..it is really well written. it all just simple words yet the meaning it hold is deep. okay i'm going to read ur other poems. keep on writing and thanks for reviewing my poems |
| BluEyes1 2004-09-13 ch 1, | you write with so much emotion it's amazing. i always feel like i can relate...anyways, great poem, as always :) |
| sc4sc 2004-09-08 ch 1, | I don't know the context of the poem, but in my own context, I can relate to this lots. Lying to fend the truth, to fend off the pity, and the pain it will cause to others... I've been there, and this poem is like it was written for me! It's very good, and the rythme is good within the poem, but if you want some positive critism, I can only say that breaking up your poem into stanzas helps, but I'm no one to tell you what to do! ^_^ Great stuff, and I'm putting it into my favourites! [P.s. how to you centralise text in your bio?] |
| Crimson Riley 2004-09-08 ch 1, | WOW and OH WOW... This is such a truly amazing piece of writing. The emotion, the flow, and the everything is simply spectacular. Astoundingly amazing |
| myno 2004-09-08 ch 1, | cool poem. The rhyming is very subtle. Coming from me, that's a complement, because it really bugs me when i read poems where the author stuck rhymes in everywhere and the whole thing sounds forced... |
| White Rain Dancer 2004-09-05 ch 1, | Gah!! I just read this and its awesome... so sad and expressive. I live in Sydney, too! ^^ Except on the Nrthn Beaches, ya know Manly, Dee Why, bla bla. And uhm... I'm 14 so you're a bit older than me i guess... anywho, great poem! Thanks for your review! |
| TickleMeElmo217 2004-09-03 ch 1, | *gapes in awe* yet another amazing poem! u r a great poet! my fav lines are "my smile is no longer true, for my eyes reveal the pain Can sorrow ever be so strong to drive a person insane?" GREAT JOB! |
| r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 2004-09-03 ch 1, | that was really really good...awesome i actually felt something while reading it *sighs* keep writin :) |
| Elizabeth Candle 2004-09-03 ch 1, | This was amazing. I know exactly where you're coming from. It was beautifully writen. Keep up the, as always, great work. ^_^ xLizziEx |