This is a great poem! I hope you figure things out!

I keep getting that darn TCP error crap everytime I try to review. Well I'm going to try to review this again, and hopefully the review will go through. Anyway I loved the poem. This would make an awesome song in all it's awesomest. This is really really good, and I loved it;s flow, This is just too smooth. Keep up the great work.

seems like everything in my mind is compleax and often like this we have similar feelings strange i wonder do you play final fantasy i might have already asked you i don't remember

Stunning rhyming and flow. Just really well written, and I liked the theme. I can't really find anyhting that you could improve in this! )
from fawny