I love the way you ended the first stanza; cause the idea of the paper being someone's old swing-holding tree makes me laugh(in a strange sort of way). I like the second stanza too, the power's in the first one for me.

All of your stuff is really beautiful, you know that? I don't even know what there is to say other then, WOW, you're talented. Do the world a favor and go out and get published!

awesome! i just have to salute you for this! wow the last line...
review me if you're free!
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This is a gorgeous poem! Simple, yet with almost hidden meaning. I love it, I really do. I am adding it to my favorites... :)