Beautiful imagery. A very triumphant ring to it in the end. This poem reminds me of the song, "Let The Spirit Move Me."
- Sarika

Sounds like you really know your stuff about Wicca. Lovely poem. Nice personification and medieval atmosphere. Right in time for the Ren Fest ;)

Excelent! Maybe you should weave a poem to warn the unwary of the dangers of weeje boards. For all we Wiccans know what perilous and treacherous gate ways they are and are wise enough to avoid them, but others are not as carefull...
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I like the grammar you used, and a interesting poem, not sure what the true meaning is. But I still like it. Keep writing. Peace(a_a)y