This piece was adorable, especially the twist in the end. That was unexpected, and quite a relief too! ;)

Hehe, I wish I could find more stories with such great twists in them!

It was excellent.

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Loved it! so cute :) you really had me going but i liked the twist at the end...although the "why didn't you ever say it before" seems kinda odd. Maybe I'm not totally sure what's going on here...hm

I absolutely love it!

Aw. That was so cute and unexpected. Me loveth the story.

woah, talk about a plot twist. i love it, i think it's really well-written.

Wow, that was the kind of ending that I totally adore. And I can honestly say that I didn't exect it at all. Good job

Chez

Aww! that was so great! The end was such of a great twist! I was really expecting an oh-I-suddenly-changed-my-mind-and-I-love-you-more- than-my-to-be-wife story from the beginning and I'm so glad it wasn't like that. Great idea. Great job!

-blackberrydream

Oh! So sweet. And such nice twists that were inserted. I definitely didn't expect the ending at all.

That's so cute! I love the twist in the story. Very good.

Aw, this is such a cute story. And the way you spelled Davyn

Aww that was such a sweet story. I really love the ending.

Wonderful. As sweet as sugar, and completely unpredicatble. Perfect.

aww! that was so adorable. I had no idea.