Reviews for Untitled Short Story

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blackberrydream 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseAww! that was so great! The end was such of a great twist! I was really expecting an oh-I-suddenly-changed-my-mind-and-I-love-you-more-than-my-to-be-wife story from the beginning and I'm so glad it wasn't like that. Great idea. Great job! -blackberrydream
Ofinterest 2007-05-18 ch 1,	abuseOh! So sweet. And such nice twists that were inserted. I definitely didn't expect the ending at all.
lilylupin7 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abuseThat's so cute! I love the twist in the story. Very good.
Mevampiregirl 2006-06-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw, this is such a cute story. And the way you spelled Davyn
Tom 2005-07-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww that was such a sweet story. I really love the ending.
Silver Sparkz 2005-04-21 ch 1,	abuseWonderful. As sweet as sugar, and completely unpredicatble. Perfect.
M L 2005-03-22 ch 1,	abuseaww! that was so adorable. I had no idea.
Nova-Janna 2005-02-07 ch 1,	abuseOh, that was cute! Wonderfully written, short, and to-the-point, with a bit of a twist. Had me fooled...But then again, that's not saying much.
Luminated Blood Star 2005-02-07 ch 1,	abuseOMG! That was SO good. The twist at the end was REALLY unexpected and so sweet, though I normally figure out the twists. I love this story.
Pineapple Chiffon Cake 2004-09-27 ch 1,	abuseOh wow! This was really good! ^_^ Perfect before-bedtime reading! I was like "Oh no! Angstfest!" And then at the end I was giggling like a mad duck. This was really nice to read. Great job!
Ms. Eerie Queerie 2004-09-13 ch 1,	abuseOh how cute! ^.^ SECOND CHAPPIE PLEASE TRISTAN SOUNDS WAY CUTE!! COOL! I LIKE HIM! AND I DUNNO WHY! THE UKE SINDRUM I TELL U! I LOVE HIM! PLEASE WRITE MORE OH GREAT ONE I BE OF THEE! . BYE
Thunder Dart 2004-09-06 ch 1,	abusegasp I was so sure Tristan was marrying Amelia... It just made me really happy to read it, like when you watch one of those movies that you're sure everything is ruined for the main characters and then it turns out perfect. Yay.
magicnina 2004-09-04 ch 1,	abuseCute! Fluffy. Sounds just as god as when you described it to me.
ola 2004-09-03 ch 1,	abuseyohe! loved it! i was a little sad, but your story cheered me up! thanks a lot! great twist at the end! uterly fantastic. it just found its way onto my favorite story list grins =)
Beautiful Midnight 2004-09-03 ch 1,	abuseWoo, you used the names I suggested. That was such a sweet little story. I was all "Gah! She's gonna kill him!" And then you were all "No, no. We're your dads." So .. smack For making me think before noon. Damn you. Great story, though. Loved it, it's in my favorites.

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