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| Kar3b3ar 2006-11-07 ch 1,  | abusei realy like it so far and it helps me review for psychology at the same time. |
| Bimbo-Trouble 2006-10-20 ch 20, | abuseupdate whenever you can but just dont forget to update please! i really ejoy the story thanks heaps. |
| what's up world 2005-02-01 ch 20, | abuseanother of ur fantastic stories. im interesting in psychology myself, but i dont think ill be majoring in it or anything. sort of like a hobby..but it really cant be one..so..i dont know..an interest perhaps? hmm, anyways, ryann sounds maniacal. why didnt sylvia say something to her parents about meena and ryann going out? anyways, please update sooN! |
| Jacangirl220 2004-12-01 ch 20, anon. | abusei like this story. keep writing! |
| ClaimingUntoughable 2004-10-19 ch 20, | abusehey love this chapter hope u can write mkore very soon |
| BlackCat03 2004-10-15 ch 20, | abuse"murder is illegal in all 51 states" how about we take him to some deserted island and kill him there? i like it ra! you MUST keep going ... reminds me ... i have updates to do as well. make sure you review mine! and good luck on your hw ... and the ... doctor *kiss* |
| missy 2004-09-25 ch 19, anon. | abuseI've read the whole story so far, and i must so WOW. I love it. I hope you'll continue to write. :) |
| ClaimingUntoughable 2004-09-25 ch 4, | abusehey love this chapter hope u can write more very soon |
| BlackCat03 2004-09-25 ch 19, | abuseit wouldn't let me review earlier for some strange reason. its getting good. i hope you continue to do more. muah ra-chan! |
| erin 2004-09-24 ch 19, anon. | abuseWAH IM SO SUPPOSED TO BE YOUR UBER REVIEWER and your chapter is...like...short again...*cries* *ahem* lemme try this ...thing people call praying/begging/being an annoying person... AUTHOR OH DEAR GOD ...i mean AUTHOR... PLEASE find a way to make the chapters LONGER for i am losing interest very quickly ...*no im not but what the hey anything to get author's attention* SO PLEASE HEAR MY PRAYERS AND MAKE THE CHAPTERS BIGGER *ahem * *mutters something* so i aint good at it... ~erin~ |
| Jackie 2004-09-24 ch 19, anon. | abuseIt was short but still good. I knew Sylvia would be valuable to the plot! That little girl better beat ryann up! Lol. Well she's smarter than him (actaully anyone is) so she'll do something about it for her sister. |
| Amber 2004-09-24 ch 19, anon. | abusegood chappie:) look forward to an update -Amber |
| BlackCat03 2004-09-23 ch 18, | abusei like her, sylvia is neat. based on a classmate ... wow, i think i like her :P she's very observant that girl is. pleas keep going. i wonder if anna'll ever tell alice about what happened ... contrary to what people think ... i give the mom credit for trying and i hope everything goes well ... FINISH RA-CHAN! *wild kat tackle* |
| Jackie 2004-09-22 ch 18, anon. | abuseHey again! I really need to express my feelings on this! Anna should just say at the table "THAT BASTARD RAPED ME AND NOW HE IS HARASSING ME!" How DARE he go into her old house! I hate him so much! But otherwise great chapter, lol. Will Sylvia somehow be a help to Anna in all of this? I hope so, she seems like a good person who wants her sister's love. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| erin 2004-09-22 ch 18, anon. | abuse*dies*... u...u...U TOOK SO LONG and...ur...ur...ur...chapter! it's so...NOT LONG *dies again* update more im sure u did fine on yer testeroo! lol ^_^ ~erin~ |