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| Back of Beyond 2007-05-11 ch 2,  | abuseSounds like a fun story so far, don't suppose there's any chance of an update...? |
| FoR rEaSoNs UnKnOwN 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseone word...Awesome. Love where you're going with this, |
| Stefen 2004-09-14 ch 2, | abuseHehehe! I like it! Update! |
| rainbowskye 2004-09-13 ch 2, | abuseThis seems light-hearted and a fun thing to read so far. Yay! |
| Ian 7786 2004-09-13 ch 2, | abusegood start, but you need to develop you charaters more. please write more. |
| dangle*my*feet 2004-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI'm putting this on my favorites list, just because you said Poof so many times. Kidding, silly. Don't look all offended like that. It's also becuase you said "Very sexy, no?" *wink, giggle* |
| Stefen 2004-09-03 ch 1, | abuseCool! |
| Crazy-Word-Painter 2004-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abuse"I'm Kyle! POOF! I'm Karla! POOF! I'm Kyle again! Ha-ha! Fun!" LMAO! That was funny! At first I thought this was going to be slightly ammiturish (is that a word? lol) and silly because of the way you had him saying 'hi, this is my story' but by the time I got to the end I really liked it! Good job! |