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| atreyu love 2008-08-15 ch 14,  | abusethis story is soo good :D why hasnt it been updated? and i love the relationship between conlen and dara :DD PLEASE UPDATE! |
| atreyu love 2008-08-15 ch 9, | abuseaww. they finally kissed! and they are admitting their feelings for each other.. sort of :D |
| Fairytale Rescue 2008-05-01 ch 14, | abusePlease update soon! |
| kurara3 2006-07-07 ch 14, | abuseah you have to update...plz sorry if that sounded rude. i can understand how it can b annoying if people keep bugging you to update...not like people bug me but ya. omg it's so good though and you stopped and and yeah.kurara3 >_ |
| Fisi Mtimia 2006-06-28 ch 14, | abusePlease sir can I have so'mor? |
| Paper.Eskimo.Boots 2006-01-17 ch 14, | abuseThe mage is cool. He's my favorite character out of the first one and this one. I like this a lot and I want to know what happens! I want to know who the third person is really bad, I'm guessing the third person is found and/or met in the third? Assuming I didn't imagine that you mentioned this was going to be a trilogy, of course. You must update! |
| Morgan Davis 2005-12-11 ch 14, | abusehey! great story! i think they kinda fell in love too fast tho. . . i mean how long did they know each other. . . two days? then he called her love and left?! i mean come on lol. i was kinda like uhh when did this change occur? oh well i suppose. i still love the story! keep it up! hope your writers block doesnt hold up! |
| letylyf 2005-11-09 ch 14, | abuseOhmygosh! I love your stories! This one is so much fun. It's playful, in a way that's completely compatible with the at times dark subject matter. Does that make sense? Never mind, it's enough to say that I adore your writing and I really hope you find the time/inspiration to update soon! You are amazing :) |
| Skeeter the Groundhog 2005-10-04 ch 14, | abusebrilliant, once again. please write more! |
| fireworksinabackpocket 2005-08-26 ch 14, anon. | abuse*waves arms around and cheers* W-o-o-o-o-o-o-oo! YEAH! UPDATE SOON! |
| Kjersti 2005-08-13 ch 14, anon. | abusegreat chapter, even if it´s been a while. Love this story, like your other stories. Keep up the good work! :) |
| lool 2005-06-26 ch 13, | abuseYay! |
| Indubidably 2005-06-17 ch 13, | abuseBLOODY LMAO!THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST THING IVE EVER READ! loli can just imagine someone with a spy glass wathcing through the spy glass and cackling like a loony lol...*falls off chair laughing* update soon! |
| Tala Lavara 2005-06-17 ch 13, | abuseI really like your story. It's really different from everything else that I've been reading. I can't wait to find out what the Serpentess is like. Is she half human, half snake or is it just her title? I guess I'll find out later. The only thing about this story is that everything moves really quickly. I think if you went back and drew things out longer it would be more interesting. Slow down a little, give more details, mostly on setting. You're pretty good at describing the people and what they are doing. By the way, if you get the chance, take a gander at my story. I would really appreciate any comments. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Iarrod 2005-06-16 ch 13, | abuseYou updated!! I love you!I love this story so much!! And it's getting more and more interesting!! |